Class feedback from first edit

Once we all had a first edit or had most of our footage in, we watch each of our video and gave each feedback on what we thought was good and what needed changing.
We were told that we didn't have enough footage of Summer singing, so we decided to go back to her bedroom and film some more shots of her lip syncing.We aim to film next week, this should relatively easy as summer can wear the same clothes.
The class also said that needed to make the boats a bolder as they are quite hard to see. We were going to make the boats red although on the day we didn't have any red paper so we had to use pink paper. We try moving some of the footage around, however in the end we have decided to film the boat again but without Summer, because we decided that it didn't look right when she was throwing them into the river. We aim to film in the school pond and just use close up shots of the boats so it is easier to film than going all the way to Marlow.